Third Eye Blind - Darkness Intro guitar tab

ok this is my first tab so be gentile.

this is the intro to darkness by third eye blind on the "blue" cd

standard tuning...

and it goes...a sumthin... like this...

=slide

P=pick

E|-------------------------------|

B|-------------------------------|

G|------11---9--11---9-83-------|

D|----9----9-------9-------------|

A|--9----------------------------|

E|-------------------------------|

E|----------0------------------|

B|------------0----------------|

G|----1-4-1-----1-2p1--1-------|

D|--3--------------------4-----|

A|-----------------------------|

E|-----------------------------|

E|-----------------------------|

B|-----------------------------|

G|-------11---9--11---9-83----|

D|-----9----9-------9----------|

A|-59-------------------------|

E|-----------------------------|

E|----------0---------------|

B|--------------------------|

G|----1-4-1-----------------|

D|--3-----------------------|

A|--------------------------|

E|--------------------------|

i hope i didnt totally crap that one up but there is my best attempt

any suggestions are very welcome, i'm just kinda learning so i would love some critisism.

thanks and have fun