Fenix Tx - Tearjerker bass tab

I think this is about right it's really hard to hear the bass in this so just listen to the cd for the timing please tell me how i did because this is my first bass tab.

Intro Riff:

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|4444444444---------------|4 (let ring out)(last time play this)--|

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Verse:

No Bass

Chours:

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|--------------------------443311--------|

|2222222222222222-66666666-------44------|

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|-22222222222222222-4444444444444444-----|

Break:

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|2222222222222222-4444444444444444-------|

End:

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|-4-|

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Song Order:

Intro Riff (x4)

Verse (No Bass)

Intro Riff (x2)

Verse (No Bass)

Chorus (x1)

Intro Riff (x2)

Verse (no Bass)

Chorus (x1)

Intro Riff (x4)

Break (x1)

Intro Riff (x4)

End